Week 2: Confusion

Last week was rough.... and it was only week 2! We met up almost everyday trying to finish our story. We have so many versions as after our first story was done, we pitched it to our teachers and then we changed it a lot of times after hearing their comments. For a while, we were not focusing on the right thing and that wasted time. It was lucky the teachers knocked some sense into us.

Its a public holiday today(Labour Day was yesterday) and we met up.....i should get used to this.

So as usual we changed the story again because last Friday, my brain decided to actually work and be smart. So when I looked through the story, I realised that if it was interpreted the wrong way, it was actually sending a very wrong message. The total opposite to what we wanted to express through our story. 

But on the other hand, we managed to create a new version in a day, which is slightly simpler and shorter and might have better character growth. My group mates are going to pitch this version to the teachers tomorrow to see if we are on the right path. But we all agreed that this is the final story unless there is something majorly wrong with it. 

So, so far so good! :)